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Question 1 — "Why do you want to study this course?" — is the most important section of your personal statement for the majority of courses. This is where admissions tutors look for evidence that you genuinely understand and are intellectually engaged with the subject you want to study.
Motivation in this context does not mean "I want to get a good job" or "my parents think this is a good choice." It means: what specifically about this subject excites your intellectual curiosity, and what evidence can you show for that excitement?
The best answers to this question have three elements:
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A[Specific interest<br/>What fascinates you] --> B[Evidence of engagement<br/>What you have read, explored, investigated]
B --> C[Intellectual depth<br/>What you think about it — your own analysis or questions]
Do not write about the subject in general. Write about a specific area, question, or problem within the subject that genuinely interests you.
| Subject | General (Weak) | Specific (Strong) |
|---|---|---|
| History | "I find History fascinating" | "I am particularly drawn to the historiographical debate about whether the Tudor Reformation was primarily driven by theology or politics" |
| Computer Science | "I enjoy programming" | "The problem of algorithmic bias in machine learning — where training data reflects existing inequalities — raises questions about whether 'objective' algorithms can ever be truly neutral" |
| English | "I love reading" | "Angela Carter's rewriting of fairy tales in The Bloody Chamber made me question how narrative structure itself encodes power dynamics" |
| Medicine | "I want to help people" | "My interest in diagnostic reasoning — specifically how physicians weigh competing hypotheses under uncertainty — was sparked by reading Jerome Groopman's How Doctors Think" |
The specific interest must be supported by evidence that you have actively pursued it:
| Type of Evidence | Example | What It Shows |
|---|---|---|
| Independent reading | "I explored this further in [author's] [book/article]" | Self-directed learning |
| Extended project | "My EPQ on [topic] allowed me to investigate..." | Research skills, sustained effort |
| Online courses or lectures | "A Coursera module on [topic] introduced me to..." | Initiative and access to degree-level content |
| Conversations and debates | "Discussing this with my teacher led me to question..." | Intellectual engagement beyond assessment |
| Personal investigation | "I designed a small experiment to test..." | Scientific thinking and curiosity |
The strongest statements do not just describe what you read or did — they show what you thought about it:
This is where you demonstrate the independent thinking that universities value most.
A strong Q1 response follows this structure:
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